Fit advice for the Camp Shirt

I've been working on a muslin of the Camp Shirt. I want to ask your collective help with the fit, particularly with the sleeve /armhole. I started with a size 6 D cup and transitioning to a 12 for the waist and hips. It was a revelation to start with a size to fit my high bustard use a larger cup size! I shortened the front and back bodice by 3/4inch. My measurements are High bust 35.5 Full Bust 37" Waist 32 High hip 40.25 Low hip 37.5 After first basting I decided to lower the breast dart to point more toward my fullest bust, though it did fit nicely before anyway. For the sleeve, I did a full arm adjustment to the short sleeve to add 3/4 inch by spreading and trying to maintain the former cap height. I am just not sure what I am seeing with the sleeve. So hard to see oneself without a friend. I will load a few photos. any advice is so much appreciated!